Dear Sir or Madam,
I feel the need to bring to your knowledge about an issue with supermarket. Allow me to elaborate.
On 02.05.2018, I had visited your store along with my mother-in-law for buying the goods of daily needs. However, while I was picking up toilet paper on aisle 9, the whole stack of roll fell on me as it was not arranged properly. I have highlighted about the impending danger due to poor setting to your store manager on numerous occasions, but it seems nobody was interested in rectifying the issue. Moreover, it is not about the incident that happened, but due to the said incident the adjoining rack which had iron rods standing on one corner lost its balance and fell on me. As a result, I received 7 stitches on my elbow and 3 on my head.
Further, the doctor has advised me 3 weeks of bed rest as a result of events that transpired in the market. It saddens me that your employees are not concerned about safety of the shoppers. I hope you will empathize with my situation and also reprimand your staff to be vigilant in future.
I hope stringent action will be taken by you. Keep me updated.
Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...lso reprimand your staff to be vigilant in future. I hope stringent action will be ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5619047619 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.609436912 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8063706388 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6923076923 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0570506779341 0.216113520407 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0204348166271 0.0766984524023 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380170669251 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541882042839 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352953828876 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.