With the revaluation of industrial, we are going through many technological and day to day life changes. Many people are argued that people are no longer physically fit and active as they used to be in past days. This essay will first discuss causes behind such change and then will discuss what we can do to make it right.
To begin with, I believe there are many reasons people do not exercise these days, but lack of time is the primary reason behind it. Everybody seems to lead busy lives with office works and other business related works that make life wealthy. For an example, my wife and I both go to work at early in the morning and come back at sundown hence it is our main source of income. After that we have no time to do any exercise since we have to cook and look after our children. Moreover, I believe with this better technological equipment allows people to do nothing in tough grind but comfort their life style and also Television makes people lazy. For an example, I personally prefer watch Television during my free time and use vehicle to do shopping even though the town shopping mall is in walking distance from our house.
Finally, there are number of effective solutions available to deal with such problems. For an instance, build an indoor office gym and motivate employees to do excesses in it like at Google Company everyone should participate gym classes after lunch for 1 hour of time. Not only that but also if there is a supportive person to do fitness activities with you it will push people to do so. For an example, when I was in college my roommate was a bodybuilder and I used to go to gym with him every day.
In conclusion, humans need to have a physically active life to maintain their healthy life to become a strong individual who will be physically and mentally fit to face a brighter future with their family
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, look, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54896142433 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43506119456 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557863501484 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5542127014 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162401672625 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552014437418 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057200649129 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103023149087 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572873636698 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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