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People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities
College or university ,The institutional hub for knowledge .Many students join college for various purposes such as enhancing experience, career prospects ,Gaining knowledge etc. However there are few people who attend college for other reasons , I shall explain my perspective in this essay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ity ,The institutional hub for knowledge .Many students join college for various p...
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...ses such as enhancing experience, career prospects ,Gaining knowledge etc. Howeve...
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...ple who attend college for other reasons , I shall explain my perspective in this ...
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...shment is to spread / provide knowledge.One of the main reason that Many students a...
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...he studies that can fetch promising jobs ,For instance In the current scenario, IT...
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...ies for computer or software programmers .As per the survey done by the university...
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...s for computer or software programmers .As per the survey done by the university o...
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...doing higher studies in computer science . Let me explain the Second reason ,Pe...
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...ce . Let me explain the Second reason ,People who has passion of their interest...
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...ance, My wife is fond of medical science ,to full fill her desire she did her mast...
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...aecology and excelled in her profession.The statistics show that people who attend ...
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...ople go to college such as social status , Family pressure and some for fun Howev...
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...nowledge in the area of their interest. as this will benefit to build individual a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28806584362 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84506806594 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.224746717 49.4020404114 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.571428571 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7142857143 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412287465177 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184804773764 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109388059277 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225653692606 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101751179185 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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