people live longer today and so people should stay in work force longer.
to what extent do you agree or disagree?
A new technological era in which we are living is a boon for us. It has skewed living life of people.because of advancement in medical field,people are living lives of 80 years .some believe that they should be in employment but I strongly recommend that they should enjoy their lives instead of working.
to commence with, people are retired at the age of 60 years.If we increase this age limit to 70 years,there will be many issues.firstly, for them it will be challenging to co-op with technology which is upgrading now and then. secondly , the work-pressure and strict deadline of work lead them to run like a machine which is very difficult for them at that age level and because of these their health might be affected owing to that youth can not get chance for working in the government sector.to exemplify, Adults who are recently graduated from universities they have cognizance of new updated technology in the market but they may not get chance to show their dexterity because government does not need new employee.
now talking about persons who are in their 60's they had very hectic schedule during their working period so they could not pursue their hobbies very well.These will be great opportunity for them to utilize their time for doing those stuffs which they like. in addition to that, they can be best mentors of their grand children. considering the fact that , nowadays both parents are working so there is no one for keeping watchful eyes on kids.for example , In my country senior citizens in the family help for nurturing kids. they teach kids about religion ad moral values .
to sum up, I would like to say that there are lots of unique things which people can perform in their retirement life for enjoyment rather than running for work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in addition, talking about, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82565789474 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62699658627 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.755420449 49.4020404114 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.0 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7777777778 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110098384457 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481764185926 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448971617495 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819481901479 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424289249212 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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