People living in the 21st century are enjoying better quality of life compared to people who lived in the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Drastic revolution has been brought in the lifestyles of the people of the 21st century since the advancement in the technology sector. The quality of life has definitely been improved with the passage of time but there are a few drawbacks of this change which cannot be ignored.
First of all, the communication gap has been bridged all across the globe through the invention of mobile phones, wi-fi and internet. The whole world has been squeezed up to a small community where the interaction among the people would be without any hindrance. Secondly, the means of commutation and the development of an advanced infrastructure has provided a great ease of accessibility for the human beings. In the previous centuries, it would take weeks and months to travel from one place to the other but now-a-days, it has become a pleasure. Furthermore, the health condition is also improvised and the life-span of an average human being also increased due to the research in medical fields for the eradication of diseases from any community.
On the darker side, people are always threatened with the environmental pollution caused at the cost of the lavish lifestyle. The quality of air, water and land has been deteriorated substantially which in turn, would directly affect the health of the people. Asthma has been linked through the pollution in the air, diarrhea through water and several allergies through land pollution which has increased manifold in the 21st century. Moreover, people are suffering from depression and anxiety continuously, in order to meet the daily requirements for a high standard living.
To sum up, although the standard of living of people today is raised but it has also posed environmental and health threats as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13986013986 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89056601738 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555944055944 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.0627369753 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.5 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146363660386 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512143236105 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413461134835 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957635348196 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032214391051 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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