People in many countries spend more and more time far away from their families. Why does this happen and what effects will it have on them and their families.
Nowadays, it has been shown that a large number of people tend to live and spend their life away from their loved ones. Reasons for this issue will be proven by analyzing that people are living far in order to work and increase their financial status and also I will go through the effects it has on individuals and their families.
To begin with, people are constantly seeking better job opportunities in order to be able to support their family. To be more specific, nowadays, educated people in poor countries are immigrating to more advanced countries to use their knowledge and potential as a key to find jobs with a higher salary. Therefore, they can send money back to their family for the purpose of children education or the cost of living in general. In addition, many countries like Canada and Australia offer wider range of occupations and opportunities to people with skills and work experience. Therefore, many people travel far from their family to use these as a starting point and work in a better environment which not only increases their financial status but also their social status in life.
On the other hand, not only this problem has a drastic drawback on individuals but also it affects their family. Firstly, in the long term, people who spend great amount of time away from their family experience different health problems. In other words, the absence of family connection and emotion between them can cause psychological problems. As a way of example, many people deal with depression or become homesick when they stay for a long period of time in a foreign country. Secondly, young members of the family who their parents work or live in other countries cannot cope with situations like this for a long time because they are in constant need of love and true support of their parents. consequently, this issue can have negative effects on their behavior and personality.
To conclude, people around the world are spending more time away from their family than before. The need for earning money and lack of job opportunities in countries are some of the facts that have led to the rise of such a problem. Unfortunately, this has a negative impact on people themselves and their family as a whole. People need to realize the importance of family and governments should do what is necessary to tackle this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion: period
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Suggestion: Consequently
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in general, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87780548628 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61389223843 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483790523691 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2838934888 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.058823529 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5882352941 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427504313953 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139384416705 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079804654299 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273290280524 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03608049206 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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