People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many people think that foreigners should follow the customs and traditions when they come to a new place. I completely agree with this view.
People who live in a new country without knowing the customs and traditions will have more problems. Firstly, it will become difficult for new residents who do not learn the local customs of the host country. For example, when people want to start their own business, they have to know about business traditions in a new country to be successful. Secondly, some actions will make local people anger. For instance, Singapore is known as the best country for clean. If new people throw the trash on the street, they will behave to pay the fee and even imprisonment.
On the other hand, there are many benefits for foreigners when they follow the culture in the new country. First of all, it is easily to make friends and they will be loved by everyone in a new place. Furthermore, new residents will learn and enjoy the festival in this country. For example, they can participate in the festival with new friends when they have some understanding.
In conclusion, I believe that living in a new country, people have to know and understand local customs and traditions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80861244019 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59459880329 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502392344498 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1297561478 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.3076923077 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369288203337 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142090415164 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107855635747 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251311831234 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988685156895 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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