Nowadays people spend a huge amount of money on special events such as weddings and birthdays. I really agree that people should share their happiness with others. However, This kind of celebration should be in a modest manner. This essay will explain why people celebrate events with excessive money.
It is true that celebrating parties is a part of cultures. This tradition has been lived longer since our ancestors to share happiness with other families and relatives. While our ancestors sacrifice their belonging such as food and livestock, nowadays people spend money by creating an event for their special occasions. In addition, these parties could be the way that people share to other relatives about their achievement, luck, and creating unforgettable memories
On the other hand, since life has become more modern, people switch the way of celebration not only to spending excessively on these parties but also to show off their wealth. Then, masses follow this trend to be a competition in order to fit with high social circle and popularity. For instance, the celebration of the wedding among millennials, these events hold with expensive budget by renting for a room, event organizer, musicians which shows spectacular experience among attendances. Furthermore, many publics trap into depth after holding parties without good budget estimation. Consequently, this event just follows the trend of spending a large amount of money for the social ladder and following high-class circles.
In conclusion, celebrating events for sharing happiness with others is a good manner. However, it could be the worse trend among the public if they just holding this event for showing wealth that leads to the spent huge amount of money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a modest manner" with adverb for "modest"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31046931408 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6912285969 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5559566787 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1325626929 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7857142857 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18461171045 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743147535061 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572895317264 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127912899162 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068041309563 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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