People spend too much on family celebrations such as birthdays and weddings?
What are the importance of these celebration?
Do you think people really spend too much?
In some culturs, people give more importance to family festivals and events, and it has been coming from their ancestors. As part these events, all family gather at a place in this events for fancy cloths and delicious food. However, this kind of big fat events depends on people financial status.and celebrate it, becouse of this younger family members get to know about the family. They feel joyful and happyness with their family while spending time with them. Moreover, they don’t hesitate when spending money.
One of main idea of these festivals is making special memories. In detail, events such as weddings and birthdays are very special moments in life, so people like to celebrate those with close friends and family members and make those days as special days in their life. For example, people give more priority to weddings in India and people spend much money in this events. Moreover, these events brings happiness into their family, that’s why they don’t care about money how much spending.
Other importance is people get off from regular work and get chance to spend their time with family members. In other words, some families work too much in regular basis at business and work place, so they get opportunity to take off from work, then feel stress free and recreation. For instance, employees the plan 50% of leave to attend family's’ and friend's weddings and other events. Furthermore, the recreational activities are more important in everybody life, so it is best time to spend great time.
To sum up, although people spending on too much on this, it is applicable to some category people such rich and well settled. In so many developing counties such as India most people are poor and middle class, that’s why try to spend reasonable amount on celebrations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04651162791 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48450346651 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531561461794 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5086426086 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.266666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345102386652 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114011982055 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753566602105 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221104162082 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504120953431 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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