Many people consider that physical training is beneficial for adolescents and it should be mandatory in schools. I certainly agree with this view. This essay will discuss the advantages of physical fitness.
To begin with, it is essential that growing children must follow a sport or outdoor activities because it keeps them active and develop their brain sharp as well. In addition to this, regular physical exercise reduces the chance of obesity among children also they will not be sluggish and lethargic. For example, if children are more fit and healthy, they will not develop diseases more often and can pay attention to their school wholeheartedly. Also, it is noticeable that children who only focus on studies and not on sports tend to be more bookish and not all-rounder, as the saying goes "All work no play makes Jake a dull boy", it is imperative to include physical education along with the curriculum. However, there is a need to be a balance with sport and studies, too much physical training may eat up a majority of the time, which may affect the grades and results in the poor academic year.
Besides these, group sports also promote team building among students. For instance in Cricket, players have to coordinate their strategy and cooperate with each other. Hence, playing sports, these qualities can be developed early in their lives. Also, it is evident that children who play sports are more social and outgoing because they interact with other people on a regular basis, it helps in their overall personality development. Additionally, numerous universities have scholarships designed specifically for students who have inborn talent in sports. Moreover, by excelling in sports, students can pursue their career in sports as well. Nowadays sportsmen are counted as the most successful people in the world, they not only earn lumpsum money but they are also more popular in the whole world.
to recapitulate, by mandating physical education in school children can develop healthy habits, good physique, and leadership skills, however, the curriculum should be adjustable to fit academic and physical education evenly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25872093023 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71610428466 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572674418605 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8437736862 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0625 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266635077126 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865378144708 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566592871552 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17700321923 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06447007838 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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