Politicians are more responsible for protection of the environment than individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environment problems are threatening the very existence of life on this planet. Some people feel that environment protection is the responsibility of politicians. I don’t agree with this view. In my opinion, individuals and politicians need to make a joint effort to save the planet.
There is a limit to what an individual or a politician can achieve on his own. Politicians can frame laws to protect the environment. ‘Green’ laws are the need of the hour. Environment protection laws can stop factories from polluting the rivers and seas. They can stop deforestation. They can also prevent mindless quarrying and the destruction of natural resources. Even so, there is a limit to what we can accomplish through legislation.
A politician can’t control what people do in their private spaces. For example, many families burn plastic to get rid of it. They don’t realize that they are releasing harmful gasses into the environment. Some families own four or five cars. They don’t understand that vehicular pollution is one of the chief causes of global warming. A lot of things that we do to increase our comfort have negative repercussions on the environment. We don’t realize that. When we drive a private car or fly, our carbon footprint increases. No politician can stop people from flying or using air conditioners in their homes. Aeroplanes, refrigerators and air conditioners all contribute to global warming and their users are ordinary citizens like you and me.
To conclude, everyone has a responsibility to save the planet they inhabit. Political will can achieve a lot. Individuals need to make their contributions too.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'even so', 'for example', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257763975155 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.173913043478 0.155533422707 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0465838509317 0.0946595960268 49% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0155279503106 0.0501214627716 31% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0683229813665 0.0437548338989 156% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0776397515528 0.122226691241 64% => OK
Participles: 0.0155279503106 0.0403226058552 39% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.24941668643 2.80594681477 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0341614906832 0.0326793684256 105% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0900621118012 0.0861772015684 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0310559006211 0.021408717616 145% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0124223602484 0.011925033212 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1672.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 316.048096192 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.28571428571 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357142857143 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.304511278195 0.28420135186 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.236842105263 0.203846283523 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.187969924812 0.137316102897 137% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24941668643 2.80594681477 116% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.037074148 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567669172932 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 57.8060214776 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0891783567 149% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0833333333 20.7743622355 53% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5826547141 49.517814964 52% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6666666667 127.492653851 55% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0833333333 20.7743622355 53% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.291666666667 0.814263465372 36% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 41.5344611529 49.1944974215 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.36144578313 1.69124875643 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319297007012 0.332605444948 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0792355732857 0.102741220458 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0728308063586 0.0668466124924 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.400446376178 0.534860350844 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.113598482564 0.148594505496 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093158207741 0.134430193775 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590326211648 0.0742795772207 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.250123841684 0.324371583561 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0715102018573 0.0638462369009 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207025545094 0.228012699653 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578942675818 0.058150111329 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.41683366733 322% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.