Every country's economic and social well being is valued based on it's government's efficiency. It is politicians who control the government and the people. Even though they are selected by the people of that country, they holds a superior power and responsibility among them. Some people say that politicians are more responsible for the environment rather than individuals , I agree with this notion to some extent. We should have look in to this arguments from both point of view.
In politicians and governments prospective, they holds more responsibility in safe guarding the environment. They are the law makers of the country, so they can implement effective environmental protection laws to save the greenery. Furthermore, a nations environment is solemnly belong to the respective regime, it is their duty to take care of it. We can see that, if we take the example of some most polluted nations, they all have one thing in common, that is an ineffective government and environmental protection laws.
In individuals perspective, they also holds the duty to protect the natural habitat they live in. According to recent studies the household garbage costing more environmental issues than any other source. What is the point of introducing new rules if the public is not at all interested in following it. People needs to be taught well about the environmental issues created by the individuals. people need to think twice before doing careless disposal of waste and environmental destructive activities like deforestation.
In conclusion, it is the duty of the both individual and government to protect the environment. Nobody can blame each other for the same, because we are living in a society, not one or two people or the government alone can not make a difference.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...ted by the people of that country, they holds a superior power and responsibility amo...
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Line 1, column 372, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the environment rather than individuals , I agree with this notion to some extent...
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Line 1, column 442, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... some extent. We should have look in to this arguments from both point of view. I...
^^^^
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...cians and governments prospective, they holds more responsibility in safe guarding th...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...ws to save the greenery. Furthermore, a nations environment is solemnly belong to the r...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...more, a nations environment is solemnly belong to the respective regime, it is their d...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
... In individuals perspective, they also holds the duty to protect the natural habitat...
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Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ntal issues created by the individuals. people need to think twice before doing carele...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rnment alone can not make a difference.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18685121107 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12761662153 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56401384083 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5251396798 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.6875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203978452663 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628959872884 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761639125695 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1146571376 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541442186122 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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