Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.

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Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.

Some individuals are inclined to dissipate money for having tickets to attend some cultural and sporting occasions. My all knowledge , exposure and observation makes me contribute to the thought that it does miracle in terms of getting myriads kinds of amazingly incredible benefits and emoluments which have always been required to get nations as well as world more cerene, placid and tranquil.
Firstly, I derive my rational from the fact that sporting events have magical effects to ease international tension and they also make people release their patriotic emotions in a safer way: without giving any physical and financial loss .They enjoy the sensation of being victorious and triumphant. A survey conducted in U.K. has revealed that word becomes ten times more peaceful after arranging international sports events.
Another remarkably laudable factor to endorse my point of view is to bring harmony in the world by going to sporting and cultural festivals. Such events help people to minimize hatred and let them free from prejudices, thus , we are likely to have much unanimity. This very is the reason ,the areas of this universe where such exercises are practised are ralitively more harmonous.
Likewise, patriotism and compatriotism arises when people represent their country and get themselves more recognised .
Furthermore, cultural and sporting occasions are believed to be antidote to all poisonous thinking people have regarding cultural differences . It has been observed vividly ,the more people have exposure to attend these kinds of gathering, the more they are likely to love cultural diversity which is of immense importance to make world more fit to enjoy the real bliss of life.
To conclude, to be lavisher for making world peaceful is fully justified and this trend must show upward trend.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, likewise, regarding, so, thus, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34494773519 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7374450521 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630662020906 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9106868242 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.454545455 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 79.0 5.01903807615 1574% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169964552181 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584609732121 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581414009914 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770379372312 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075827842743 0.056905535591 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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