you have been sent an important document in a foreign language and you need it translated quickly. you have a friend who knows this language.
Write a letter to your friend and ask him/her to translate an important document you have received. In your letter say
– Why is it important for you?
– How fast do you need it back?
– Why do you need his/her expertise?
Hello Dhara,
Hope you are doing great with you health and spirit. The main reason for writing this letter is to ask for your help in translating one document into Spanish language. Please allow me so I can elaborate this matter in detail.
As you know I am working as Business Development Executive in one of the IT firm which is dealing with International clients and as a salesperson I have to deal with various overseas clients. We are going to sign one important contract with our most valuable Spanish client to grow our business in Spain and for that contract, our client has sent an important document to me but those are in Spanish language. Now, I have to translate those documents in English language and need to read it carefully so I can present the terms and conditions of the contract to my management before we sign the contract. From above detail you can understand how this document as important for me as my career is on stack.
I know that you have done a crash course to learn Spanish language and you have achieved expertise in the same so it would be great if you can help in translating my client’s Spanish documents into English. I have sent an email to you with scanned copy of Spanish documents as an attachment and also sent the same via Fax.
Please contact me on my phone number mentioned below immediately once you receive this letter. After you are done with translation please email me those documents.
Phone Number +91 8128464545
Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Divya
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...usiness Development Executive in one of the IT firm which is dealing with Internationa...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'firms'?
Suggestion: firms
... Development Executive in one of the IT firm which is dealing with International cli...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t for me as my career is on stack. I know that you have done a crash course...
^^^
Line 8, column 220, Rule ID: SENT_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'emailed'.
Suggestion: emailed
... Spanish documents into English. I have sent an email to you with scanned copy of Spanish doc...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mediately once you receive this letter. After you are done with translation please em...
^^^^^
Line 14, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Phone Number +91 8128464545 Looking forward to hear from you. Yours faith...
^^
Line 14, column 18, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...mber +91 8128464545 Looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Divya
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 270.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77037037037 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64664292886 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522222222222 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5252611672 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0769230769 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412486986673 0.216113520407 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146305802434 0.0766984524023 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739961663245 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191689274134 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115264819656 0.0580467560999 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.