The population of most cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities.
What problems does overpopulation in cities cause?
How can these problems be solved?
The prospect, which cities offer, appeal to many people in need of employment. However, when cities are excessively populated, it frequently lead in some negative results. This essay will consider these troubles and suggest possible solutions.
Let us with difficulties that newcomers pose on cities in search of jobs and prospect. The first problem is that it often leads to house scarcity. More families want to possess a house of their own, but cities cannot accommodate their needs immediately, so many people have to live either in cramped flats or in the street, which pose much inconvenience to other citizens as well as city authorities. Another problem is that it usually results in high unemployment. The flow of immigrants in cities may aggravate the situation with absence of jobs, so many citizens will complain that newcomers have taken their work. Furthermore, it may result in more congestions on the roads. The volume of traffic will increase to the level when it will become impossible for people to commute to work on time, because more new citizens will come and purchase cars.
To tackle these difficulties the government should take the following steps. Firstly, city governors should build more apartments. To deal with a growing number of the homeless, the government should allocate more budget for construction of apartment buildings, so that more families will obtain housing. Secondly, with financial aid of authorities, more entrepreneurs should open companies. The government can promote people to open new business by loan at low-interest rates and, therefore, provide more vacancies in the labor market, which will employ more new citizens and lower the resentment in society. Moreover, city architects should reconstruct streets. Construction companies should either widen highways or make some road one-side to reduce the number of jams on the roads, which are caused by the flow of immigrants.
In conclusion, although the flow of job and opportunity seekers to cities may lead to a plenty of problems, it is possible to solve them, if the government take the above mentioned actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29793510324 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85886215482 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554572271386 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8637740783 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7777777778 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218461225559 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705909341708 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429011717402 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132482885993 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035658428507 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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