At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of adults compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
It is observed that in recent times few nations have more number of youth in contrast to that of the senior citizens. On one hand this situation seems to be beneficial to the nation and also not so productive on the other hand.
The population who are basically above 60 years of age are known to be well experienced in terms of their knowledge about the past history and the culture of a particular region. For instance, the older people can sensitize the people who are in their twenties and thirties, about the recent conflicts occurring between people with different religions Further more they will be the best people who can act as a mentor for the younger generation to lead a better and peaceful life ahead. For example, They act as a guide for the young adults by motivating them to study hard and and earn a good job for themselves.
However any countries progress is based on the contributions done by the population of young adults who have a lot of potential in them. Young minds always involve themselves into innovations and try to apply it practically. For instance, young scientists are constantly trying to find out drugs for various deadly diseases to increase the chances of human survival. Furthermore, young girls and boys have a greater chance of participating in International sport events which can bring great laurels and glory for the country. For example, winning a football world cup will make the country popular in the World.
Although, the older generation people can act as a guide for new generation, the countries growth and prosperity lies on the youngsters. Therefore, young adults have more significance when compared to older people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...adults by motivating them to study hard and and earn a good job for themselves. How...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...and earn a good job for themselves. However any countries progress is based on the ...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... act as a guide for new generation, the countries growth and prosperity lies on the young...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in contrast, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92957746479 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75267448531 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.577346778 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113105394964 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461777376583 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447064518665 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08113862128 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042026524793 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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