At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of oler people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Balanced existence of people of all ages is indispensable in order to main the cultural cycle. However, in some countries, the population of youngsters is comparatively more than those of old folks. This essay will discuss why the advantages of having more adults as compared to old ones do in fact outweigh disadvantages.
There are two major benefits occurring from more young population. Firstly, the future of a nation is in the hands of its young-lings as more young people mean more young potential with new ideas, creativity and deep technical knowledge which will help the country to develop itself worldwide in every field and increase its global value. For instance, all the scientists who launched Chandryan2 from ISRO, India, were youngsters, however, there was no older person helping them. They themselves performed all the experiments with new techniques and the result can be seen now. Since, older people are more prone to diseases as compared to young ones, their low population mean less need of medical facilities and consequently less investment. Government, thus, can save money which can be used in the development of a country in the field of education, science, housing, et cetera. That is why, the low population of such people is considered to be positive.
On the contrary, the more number of young can also create a problem in a nation because more the number of youngsters mean more the requirement of educational institutions like schools, colleges, universities, et cetera. Being the population of matured people to be low, there will be a lack of trained and scholar teachers in order to run these institutes., Thus, old people play a role as important as young ones in order to build the future of a country.
In conclusion, number of youngsters is more than elders in some countries. However, in my opinion, even though problems might arise for the educational institutes due to more youngsters, yet I believe that it can take a country towards its bright future.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03012048193 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89471465145 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545180722892 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4689718899 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15739481816 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572473042379 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441697699361 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101359031752 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241560638091 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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