At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of oler people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In contemporary era of cut-throat competition, countries are moving forward to achieve their economic goals. Some people believes that these days there are a large population of young adults as compared to old citizens in some countries. I personally opine that the merits of this situation outweigh the demerits.
To commence with, first and the foremost is that there is an increase in the economic growth of the countries. As more young adults means more young potential with new ideas, creativity and deep technical knowledge. This will help the country to develop worldwide in every field and increase the global value. For instance, a recent launch of Chandrayan by ISRO scientists provide the recognition across the globe to our country.
Furthermore, less old citizens implies that there are fewer requirements of medical facilities given to them. Government can save money from this and use it to for the development of the countries. Government can use these funds to provide free education, vocational training and many more. For example, vocational training institutes are opened in the rural areas which train people for skills like sewing, plumber tools, wood work, embroidery and many more.
On the contrary, more number of educational institutes are required to provide education to the children. But, nowadays due to large population universities are not providing required practical knowledge to them which makes it difficult for them to find jobs which ultimately leads to unemployment.
To recapitulate the given points, even though an increasing number of young adults causes problem for educational institutes, yet I believe that it will take countries towards the bright future. As, it will surge the economic growth of countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
... growth of the countries. As more young adults means more young potential with new ide...
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Line 17, column 196, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ke countries towards the bright future. As, it will surge the economic growth of c...
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Line 17, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...surge the economic growth of countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42753623188 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85519200809 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1419070676 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157091093985 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506246881508 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526552863307 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912190537701 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639139353126 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.