At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of the young aldults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantage.
Nowadays, it has been noticed that the majority of population in a country is young people instead of older people. Some people and I completely agree with the statement that, if the country's crowd will be young and vibrant it can bring various benefits such as they can contribute better in improving the economic status.
To immense with the first benefit, young youth have full of energy, vibrant and goals to do something great for the bright future. Hence, their capacity to work is always more than anyone else. They can work long hours in order to achieve their targets and which means they will be contributing more tax towards government. Ultimately, government authorities can invest that money in other sectors like building better infrastructure and updating health services. According to me, young people are great asset for the country to develop quickly.
I also believe that, having large number of young adults will also help us to save health care resourses. Which means active people are at low risk of suffering from diseases. It can be explained through an illustration, 80% of health care facilities are occupied with people aging from 60-70 year of age. It vividly reveals that the country's money is directing to medical offices. Instead if, our crowd will be young people we can use that money to buy other objects for the country's development. Moreover, nowadays, people are well educated and acquire all crucial skills which are needed at the workplace. Additionally, they have updated knowledge of doing things quickly. Which ultimately benefits the company to progress fast. Because of all the above reasons, I believe that young generation makes a better society.
Summing up, It is undeniable that young people are utmost important for a prosperous society. because their energy level and zeal works as an assert.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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...ated knowledge of doing things quickly. Which ultimately benefits the company to prog...
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Suggestion: Because
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...se their energy level and zeal works as an assert.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15511551155 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56483848488 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577557755776 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0072148454 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7777777778 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144939100925 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444389260351 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045570028298 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884689000128 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516660758244 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.