At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In some countries, the crowd of young generations has increased in comparison with the old one. I believe that rising the number of younger citizens would be more beneficial and the positive aspects of it is far more significant for the country.
Living among young adults could lead society to a happier and more energetic life. It can be seen in a family which is a smaller size of society. Family gathering with the average age of less than 50 are more active, pretty fun and lively. It can be extended to the whole society. As a result, diseases which is related to loneliness like depression would be decreases.
From an economic perspective, there are many young experts who are enthusiastic to get involve in industry and their motivation will boost their productivity. For example in Isfahan which has lots of tourist attraction, young members of the society are trying to learn more foreign languages and work in tourist industry. Also, government dose not need to allow immigrants come to the country, and employees are originally from their country which will omit many expenses that are related to foreigner workers.
Furthermore, elderly people need care and attention especially between their family and inside their own house. When they have two or three children, the possibility of staying at their home instead of retirement home is upper. Statistics show that senior citizens who live with their family have higher level of hope to live longer.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the increase in the number of young adults would be a positive trend for both individual and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97769516729 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65979869486 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583643122677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8100079715 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6428571429 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100632065089 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341726892282 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301167102867 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633660745813 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348947283766 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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