Safety of people is a somber matter which should be taken seriously and constructing houses as per the safety norms is an essential part of it. Some people think that we are liable for our protection and thus we must be entitled to make safety standards for constructing a house. However, I disagree with this notion completely.
Firstly, government has the power to impose regulations on the public. We elect a government believing, they will do the best for us and implementing new stern laws for the safety of citizens is a part of their job. For example, in certain provinces of India, it is a crime to build a building of more than four storeys because these areas are more prone to earthquakes. Recently, we all noticed huge devastation in Nepal, deplorably caused by earthquake which had cost thousands of lives. Later, the politicians there have made certain norms for the construction of residences in order to prevent similar destruction in the future.
Secondly, people in power have the rights and resources to bring a change in society. Conversely, a group of people is neither capable nor specialized to convert something. For example, even today more than thirty percent of population in my country do not use toilets. Although, many socialists have tried to convince people to start using toilets but their diligent work gets foiled. However, our new Prime Minister is quite rigid about this practice, thus made unbending rules for it and now the entire nation is following these regulations.
In the light of this, I would like to assert that although people can assist the government in the development of a nation by putting their efforts and by assimilating changes. But this does not make them completely responsible. Lastly, it is the duty of our politicians to take care of their nation and its citizens as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, firstly, however, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93247588424 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80187029421 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594855305466 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8268567786 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196056467121 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548631445941 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460636480186 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112573400717 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584897163129 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.