The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicines. Government funding should reflect this.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that government should spend money on preventable measures of health related issues rather than spending on treatment component of diseases. This essay agrees with the statement to a greater extent because people will not have to spend hefty amount of money on treatment as well as can get rid of diseases, though, some incurable diseases will need proper treatment and medicines.
Firstly, charges of any treatment are exorbitant that not every person can afford it. That is to say that, if government starts taking preventive measures then, people can live healthy life by adapting to those measures which in turn exempt people from health related issues. For example, government started spending money on campaigns, explaining that how to prevent swine flu and eventually people also started taking measures to prevent swine flu disease. Hence, it can be substantiated that government should invest money to prevent health diseases.
Secondly, people can feel the unbearable pain due to illness. This is to say that, some contagious disease are so severe that people have to tolerate pain, albiet, if government starts spending awareness then, illness can gradually be curbed. To illustrate, government has recently find the vaccine to prevent the serious disease jaundice that occurs mainly in children. So, due to vaccination ,children, nowadays do not have to bear too much pain. Therefore, authorities should not spend money on treatments and medicines.
However, some diseases need to be treated with medicines as well as with stringent treatments. Additionally, these diseases can not be prevented only by taking various measures but,it can be cured utterly by appropriate treatment. To exemplify, alzehimeir disease is curable only when patient takes chemotherapy which is expensive but, only option. Thus, government should also take care of these types of diseases.
In conclusion, preventive measures can save the money of people as well as can help to escape from pain, but, some diseases must need treatments which should not be neglected. So, I agree to a greater extent that government should start spending money on prevention and it is recommended that, government should also start some schemes that render benefits to poor people in health sector.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 7.85571142285 293% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38611111111 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71977072155 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0705037628 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.058823529 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94117647059 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202442323705 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789370418658 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588484026305 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134145590587 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499875690828 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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