professionals such as doctorS ,nurses should pAy more than sports players or entertainment personalities. Agree or disagree.
It has long been subject of discussion whether professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. In my opinion, the former notion has several elements that deserve attention and I will elaborate it by using pertinent arguments.
There are myriad of arguments in favour of my context, the most conspicuous one lies in that doctors, nurses and teachers plays a vital role in the society by providing their services. They contribute towards human life directly or indirectly. Moreover, in order to reach this position, they do a lot of struggle and spend most of their time in serving the society. So, it is important that they must be well paid. Hence, government should pay them as per their contribution to the community.
Another argument in favour of my view is that sports and entertainment personalities also plays a crucial role for the name of the country. Good players, are representative of the country in the world for their contribution in sports. While, entertainment personalities spend more of their time in those activities which are useful to entertain the masses. Thus, all must be paid according to their efforts for nation.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that professionals, sports and entertainment personalities are great servers of the community as a whole. Lastly, in my opinion, it is better to pay all of them as per their contribution and efforts and there will be no discrimination on the account of pay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun struggle seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of struggles'.
Suggestion: a lot of struggles
...n order to reach this position, they do a lot of struggle and spend most of their time in serving...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 236, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...world for their contribution in sports. While, entertainment personalities spend more...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, moreover, so, thus, well, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10671936759 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08808742753 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549407114625 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3884340927 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3846153846 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195630008062 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654318169624 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101492318027 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130199517114 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887920139976 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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