In recent time, young adults are spending less time with family and more time with friends.why this has occurred ?Do you think parents should force children to spend time at home?
It has been seen that company of agemates is being preferred by youngsters in comparison to their parents in modern time, and this is probably due to hectic schedule of parents and the generation gap. Although parents should make the children to spend quality time at home,
they must not compel them for this.
To embark with, one of the most widespread cause is that parents themselves do not have enough time to devote to their wards. The reason being, both father and mother have been working for several hours in order to buy all the luxuries of life. Eventually, Juveniles utilise their leisure time with their peers either through hangout with them, or on social networking site as majority of them have countless friends over there. Secondly, masses have been suffering from the issue of generation gap since they believe that their parents thinking have become old fashioned. Owing to which they prefer to share their sentiments with the peer group. For instance, as per survey by Yale University 70% of the teenagers follow the advice of their friend circle instead of their caretakers.
It is an undeniable that children must spend time with their family members, but if parents would pressurise them they may gob astray since many children do not like to be controlled for their activities by anyone so they may feel pressurized and burdened which in turn leads to their ill mannered attitude for their Guardians. Apart from imposing restrictions to stay with them, parents can have some routine activities ranging from watching TV and taking supper together which automatically enable the children to stay at home and interact with their parents As a result, children would share their viewpoints with their parents rather than their friends. Eventually, they would not need to spend enough time with their peers.
To Conclude, busy scenario and gap in thinking is the main issue due to which persons of young age spend time out of their home; however, parents can mitigate this issue by having proper attention through some activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, apart from, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0701754386 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4230223363 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.3559969182 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289102666184 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134899514213 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948257405646 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180441856051 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931404677457 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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