In recent year, more and more people are choosing to read e-book rather than paper books.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
In recent era, an increasing concern from around the world is new habit of reading book.With the new developments some basic habits starting to change.This tendency has a some positive and negatives sides for the society.In this essay I will examine the both sides of arguments and provide my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, the improving the technology impact on daily issues.This impact cover the wide range of different things, such as a transportation, accommodation or even reading book.All this development not just consist of the positive sides. For illustration, with the e-books most people prefer to reading this new books and unfortunately with this tendency caused to closing of library.Due this case, the employee in which this library have to find an other occupation.Eventually, just change the reading way could be effect more and more people.
And the other hands, beside of the this situation this e books also has a many advantages. First of all, the new generation is dissimilar than the earliest ages.They don’t like to reading books because of the book are could be heavy for carrying or could be boring. Hence, with the e books be able to change this consideration. For examples, there is a lot of different colour and shape e-books.Which this books could be attractive for young consumer. Secondly, this books has a perfect advantages for rescuing of forest. For examples, just for produce small library how many tree we need it? The answer is maybe one thousand.Therefore, the wealthy countries such as a Europes they support the this technology because of the world future.
In conclusion, in view of my opinion the positive sides outweigh the negative effects.Thus the consumer should de prevent to this e-books and should be stop the cutting our forest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20205479452 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0861238237 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558219178082 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.6408901132 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.090909091 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15175952597 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583557230445 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436946567701 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869060553786 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391965469447 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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