In recent years, the family structure and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?
In the contemporary years, family structure and their perspective roles have undergone many changes. this essay will first consider the possible changes, that has occurred in household structure, it will then address the influence of these developments, followed by the reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, the domestic structure has endured numerous changes in many ways. On the first hand, caregiver's priorities have changed as they prefer to work on parenthood, thus vanishing old age notion of male supremacy where husband was the breadwinner and wife was a caregiver. For Instance, modern parents, to be more specific mothers, nowadays find child upbringing more work than pleasure. Hence, feeling overwhelmed by the responsibilities and to enjoy their life, primary caregivers choose daycares for caring for their youngsters. Moreover, many parents decide to have children later in their life, for the sake of advancing in their career, to lay a sound foundation for their pupils.
On the other hand, with regards to the question of the impact of working parents changing preferences. this trend exerts both advantageous and disadvantageous influence on family life as well as society. Firstly, a child born to prosperous parents, receives more comprehensive education, have better learning and communication skills, in consequence, benefits to society. On the contrary, non-parental care instills behavioral problems in the child. parents often experience difficulties in their relationship with their child as they have not addressed the emotional, physical and mental needs of a child. consequently, children of these parents are more likely to be involved in antisocial behaviors, while their parents may experience feelings of loneliness and worry.
To conclude, several advancements are happening in the family composition, thereupon paving its way both positively and negatively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74113475177 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1208172047 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609929078014 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9406087974 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.642857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9285714286 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104573708795 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419302129657 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479901167846 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775671523733 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346994450808 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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