in recent years, farming practice has changed to include methods such as farming factory and the use of technology to improve crops. some people believe these developments are necessary, while others regard them as dangerous and advocate a return to more traditional farming methods. discuss to the point of view and give your own opinion.
Correspond to experimental evidence about farming methods, there are many controversies between relay on advanced technological methods or tedious traditional approaches. In my believe it seems to me the disadvantages are outweigh the advantages in the case of practicing advanced process, I wish I could explain my point of view by analyzing both side of argument .
There are two prominent reasons to exploit why factory fertilizing farms and genetically modified food should be efficient enough to alternate. Indeed widespread amount of farming lands in Asia and Africa are exposed by famine and drastic drought in recent decades, so on many people around the world have experienced starving appearance in consequence of lack of sufficient food. While factory farms could expedite the process of product harvesting, beside them GM products not only would be resistant on drought disaster but they might be grown to deal with insidious pests.
Those who return to advocate old traditional process want to demonstrate to somewhat technological methods would have harmful effect on healthy and environment. In fact the recently results of agricultural experiments are not as acceptable as they expect to be. The investigated have shown environment ecological balance was modified on devastatingly state. In addition most of the cute diseases have created because of chemical fertilizing consumption on agricultural industry. Thus the natural environment has not cope with thing like this yet.
In balance conclusion, there is strong argument in both sides of case, however advanced technological methods which applied on short terms might have their own advantages but it seems to me in last long period it should better to investigate on traditional methods on the great deal. It is participated relay on new schemes and safe alternative process would be considerable proposal to implement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...r tedious traditional approaches. In my believe it seems to me the disadvantages are ou...
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Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...ve it seems to me the disadvantages are outweigh the advantages in the case of practicin...
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Line 1, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... view by analyzing both side of argument . There are two prominent reasons to e...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...hould be efficient enough to alternate. Indeed widespread amount of farming lands in A...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...was modified on devastatingly state. In addition most of the cute diseases have created ...
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Line 5, column 480, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...g consumption on agricultural industry. Thus the natural environment has not cope wi...
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Line 5, column 517, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'coped'.
Suggestion: coped
...y. Thus the natural environment has not cope with thing like this yet. In balance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, while, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51369863014 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11356715967 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626712328767 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.465497508 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.166666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151666586136 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471791247401 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391501126338 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832218442748 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353766743096 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.