In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customer travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping.
Is this positive or negative development?
In last few decades, the regional small scale business has been affected due to revolutionary change of supermalls. Therefore, the consumers are being attracted to big shopping stores and local business has been closed. This essay will discuss how this aspects leads to negative factors.
To begin with, the one of the main drawback of closing local small shops is financial crises among local vendors and society. If the individuals will not purchase products from local merchants then definitely it will influence the local small business. Hence, this practice would be onus for economic dilemma. Secondly, self-business provides financial and confidence support to human beings. Thus, the unemployment rate of any nation will be intensified while promoting supermarkets culture in particular province. A part from that, the income of local shop owners will affect badly and the chance of poverty will increase.
Furthermore, some local small businesses are based on local cultural artwork. Apparently, if these shop service will be terminated, then local art and artist will suffer and probably will be endangered soon. For instance, according to recent survey in INDIA, The majority of people are preferred products from super malls, whereas, the regional artwork and shops are not remain as primary sources of income. Consequently, the traditional work is also being disappeared. Moreover, the small businesses are the main competitor for supper stores and provide goods at adequate rate as compare to retail stores which sell products on fixed prices. What is more, inflation rate may be increased as shopping mall charge extra for such parking facility.
To sum up, no doubt shopping store contains all goods under one roof. However, it is also responsible for chaos and financial instability of local vendors. The tendency of individuals to buy products from supermarkets leads to endangered of regional small businesses. Therefore, it is a negative trend for small scale businesses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42122186495 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79546813878 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585209003215 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9082113693 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7368421053 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4736842105 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192529262194 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627553941586 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450603623639 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127063521611 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013980292575 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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