In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
Customers today prefer to make a purchase from a big shopping mall or a shopping center resulting in the decline of local shops and traders. I believe that this change in preference has positive outcomes. This essay will first discuss the advantages of the shopping mall for customers; secondly the economic advantages; followed by a reasoned conclusion.
first, shopping malls helps to bring all national and international brands under one roof. This congregation of all the brands saves customer’s time and provide him with ample choices to shop. These places not only cater to the shopping needs of the people but also act as a spot for recreational activities like cinema, indoor games, and food courts. Consequently, in cities where public space is limited, the shopping malls have become a hub for family outings and get-togethers as most of these places are weather controlled and save people from scorching heat and chilling cold outside.
Secondly, they have not only proved fructuous for buyers but have also provide an income boost for traders. The entry of international brands has bought an investment and has open job opportunities for locals. For example, the opening of the Walmart store in India was regarded as a big boost to foreign direct investment. Moreover, they have also proven themselves to be a flourishing ground for entertainment businesses. As most of the movie halls and big sports chains today prefer shopping malls as their location to attract a large number of potential customers.
To conclude, shopping malls have galvanized the way people shop. These centers not only cater to the shopping needs but have also proven to be a recreational hub and the entry of multinational brands with them has only added to the government’s coffer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ping malls as their location to attract a large number of potential customers. To conclude, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92331844405 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558620689655 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5931697718 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.714285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26458451597 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101499490782 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802282020184 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181467073973 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709318955383 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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