When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With rising housing demands and shrinking public spaces, its often argued that planning residential towns should consider the need for public parks and sporting centres, rather than opening commercial shopping centres to make extra bucks. I strongly agree with this view and the essay will further elaborate reasons for approval; followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, as people continue to migrate towards big cities, the cities are witnessing continuous expansion and demand for the creation of new towns to spread the burden of ever-increasing population growth. Consequently, the mindless expansion has resulted in shrinking of public spaces and has choked the city. It, therefore, becomes important to include provision for open spaces while planning new townships to provide the breathing space to the city. Parks and sports centres provide commonplace for people to socialize and build stronger communities. They promote health and happiness as they offer space for recreational activities to both young and old.
Moreover, these places have gained more importance today as most of the youngsters prefer to play indoor, spending time on mobile and forgo the benefits of outdoor games. Having a park or sports centre in towns will attract youngsters towards sports and physical activities. In addition to this, these places provide a common ground to organize cultural and community events. In contrast to this, the recent culture of promoting shopping centres in towns have only fed to the monetary greed of planners. Although they provide convenience of shopping to locals and a place for indoor activities, these centres are mainly responsible for traffic jams and the disappearance of vast open spaces. Therefore, they should be developed outside the towns to separate commercial and residential spaces.
To conclude, shrinking open spaces demands a paradigm shift in town planning where more focus should be placed on public health and engagements, creating recreational spaces for people to rejuvenate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52564102564 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76768712912 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4569144257 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.142857143 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231948654507 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782362792719 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050080835879 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139215625829 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204599799128 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.