In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do shopping
Is this a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays, shopping complex are gaining popularity as a lot of people visit supermarkets or plazas for purchasing articles or several items but somewhere, it has negative consequences on the retail store. This essay will discuss both the benefits as well as an adverse effect on development in detail.
Todays malls become the identity of the metropolitan area because cities get popularity due to the construction of various malls in the large space and that is the reason for the attraction of many visitors. Besides, shopping a lot of customers spent their leisure time in window shopping and also, explore new products existing in the market. These centres contribute a lot towards positive development, not only facilities all the items at one place that saves crucial time of people but also increase the purchasing power of them by offering various discount offers on a range of products and make available good quality items at reasonable price. For instance, India's largest Pacific mall situated in Mumbai lure many celebrities due to which brand get promoted and help to generate funds. As a result of these factors, enormous advancement can be observed.
On the other hand, shopping malls put the business of small local shops in a perilous state. It has a profound effect on the life of many businessmen as it badly affects the source of their livelihood. Also, a large area is required to construct a mall or centre that results in cut down the trees and exploitation of the environment.
To sum up, even though, shopping malls are on all the rage but it has adverse consequences on local stores as well. This essay discussed the positives and negatives development. I precise, despite having some positive impact it has more harmful effects as it grabbing the business of retail outlets persistently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, well, as for, for instance, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83478465101 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591362126246 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1819713299 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.076923077 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294736051233 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946414891251 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656168774006 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170932687204 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482345651643 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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