In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping center or mall to do their shopping.Is this a positive or a negative development?

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping center or mall to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or a negative development?

Submitted by Satrajit on Wed, 08/29/2018 - 01:51

Nowadays, more attraction is shifted to super stores or huge shopping centers instead of small local shops. There are several reasons behind it, but apart from the reason question arise if this transformation is really helping society to develop? I would like to discuss these in below part of essay.

In order to understand the positive and the negative of above issue, it is important to first dig into the cause of the problem. Small shops always have limited variety of products due to budget and space constraint. Customer who are looking for the choices will get only few items to compare with, whereas on other hand, large shopping centers and malls usually contains spacious shops with wide range of products. Moreover, the other benefit is that you can find multiple shops at one place, for instance, you can find cloth market and shoe market in a same mall. Various discounts are also available in malls so why would a buyer will go to small shops instead of malls?

It is true that there are benefits of malls but in my opinion this has a lot of consequences on local shop owners. Despite of having good quality and unique products available, they are not able to make good profit. Even some shop owners are struggling for survival due to reduction in sell which also have a negative impact on families of such shop owners. With this change, rich are becoming richer and poor small shop owners are becoming more poor.

Change is the only constant in today's world. To grow in future people need to acknowledge and adapt the changes in society and mold themselves accordingly. This will help in reduction of negative impact caused by the change of era.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76206896552 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3637899595 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606896551724 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5176402954 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320726684477 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910979601086 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655938287997 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162491900987 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826803621637 0.056905535591 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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