Impact of modernisation is quite visible in our society althought it has brought many developments but it also has a drak side. Culture of shopping at malls have becaome a trend recently and has seen a steep increase which is affecting local shops as they are not able to match their prices and standards. In this essay we will discuss the impacts of this revolution which is affecting the local shops.
Intorduction of big shopping center in our era has led people to diverge from thier earlier go to shops towards new and improved habbits of buying regular things. Benefits of these malls are much larger rather the ealrier avilable markets, here we can shop all items at once and we do not have to travel to every other shop to filfill our needs. Along with the availibility all these centers are fully air condtioned which help buyers to spend more time in them without getting tired in the outer weather which can be harsh sometimes.We can have entraintment and food in these venues with all big brands catering to our needs.
Ealier established markets have products for every economic status but the standard were compromised, this was changed by intriduction of the new markets of modern world. Beter quality is provided along with resaonable price which benefits customer as product life is enhanced and no burden on their pockets. Local shops have estableished thier monopoly which was harming the society as the prices were decided by their authority which was not the exact evulation of the commodity.Though the impact to local markets has been widespread but still we haven't seen a large transforamtion from their end.
In conclusion although change is always diffcult in the begining but it is neccessary as it brings new direction for future genrations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95986622074 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67490375935 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581939799331 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0467318012 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.3 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254730833304 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932451177805 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07219649259 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128591320097 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078138478135 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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