In recent years proportion of crime committed by youngsters is on the rise family are solely responsible for this trend. Do you agree or disagree with the statement.
More and more young people committed to crimes in recent years. Some suggest that no one is to blame but the criminals themselves. In my opinion, however, their parents have actually contributed to the trend and are the only reason why those youngsters ended up breaking the laws.
it is undebatable that family plays an important role in individual's life as young people look for someone they can rely and learn from.when we were young, we looked up to our parents for guidance and saw them as our role models. Even Infants tend to imitate the behaviors of their parents. study also shows children will follow in their caretakers’ footsteps. For example, teenagers are prone to become a drug addict when growing up with family members who also took drug. Likewise, if their parents have healthy habits, their children will follow suit too.
Secondly, love and support from family can prevent teenagers from going astray. A recent study done by University of Hong Kong suggested that children with working parents who are not be able to spend more than an hour a day with them are easier to suffer from emotional illnesses which can cause negative impacts on their behavior and lead to wrong decisions as they resort to outside support for affirmation.
In conclusion, it is obvious that family plays a huge role when it comes to teenagers’ development. The recent uptick in number of youngsters committing crimes is indeed revealing the challenges and situations many families are facing in our societies. Instead of cracking down on crimes, authorities should sort out the roots of the problem and offer services to help the teenagers who are lacking family’s support.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, likewise, look, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69587506145 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.6496127242 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151395785951 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05157770391 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513996957259 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945670835204 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235493722779 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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