Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Lately, it has been seen that there is an incline in the proportion of abortion hence it has become a debatable issue among society. Some natives believe that it should be legitimate but others argue it. I think it should be legalized or illegal mainly depend upon the situations. This essay will discuss the reason whether it should be implemented or prohibited by law.

Abortion plays a vital role in controlling the birth rate which further protect the nations from threats like overpopulation, unemployment, poverty etc. Unfortunately in some cases when fetus is not developed properly in the womb, this critical situation miscarriage is not only the best way to protect the mother but also safe baby from the difficulties he/she will face after birth. Furthermore, sometimes especially in case teenagers where they are not physically and mentally strong enough to give birth, therefore, termination of pregnancy is the only key to have safer future for them.

On the other hand, there are many countries like developing and non developing nations like India where female foeticide is a major issue. If this is legalized then difference in sex ratio would increased rather than improving. For instance, it is surveyed by Indian government that sex ratio is 8:2. This will have adverse impact on the society as a whole. In worst situation, it will become a business for those doctors who do it illegally. Additionally, abortions have adverse impacts on the health of women such as heavy internal bleeding which leads to weakness and create complications in further pregnancy.

In conclusion, I feel that this is mainly depend on the situation on both arguments which support evidences. Therefire, I think that it can be legalized only when the future of nation, mother and baby is concerned is at risk.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09060402685 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83568166257 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610738255034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4320885504 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.133333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166724207357 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544327938167 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492724746036 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101389887911 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768052863784 0.056905535591 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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