Animal has a significant role in eco-cycle. They are inevitable part of the earth. It is indeed true that the population of wild animal has been decreased since last few decades. In this essay I will describe some measures to prevent this problem.
To commence with, industrialisation is one of the most affected factor in extinction of flora and fauna.To prevent this, government should implie some strict legislation on deforestation which carried out by factories and human for development.Also, it should be prohibited to prey wild creatures and allocate protected regions for survive.If national authorities subsidise some assistance to the wildlife park and sanctuary so it might be helpful to decrease the ratio of destruction of wild animals.For instance, Indian administration run one a preservation campaign for a Gir lion which curb the diminishing rate of lion around 27%.
Secondly, government should spread awareness among people about the hazardous problems of wildlife species.It should be declined the requirements of accommodation which can only fulfilled by destruction of wildlife habitat. If people are aware about consequences so they tend to develop more trees which can convert in wild-preserve area where all extincting species can be lived.For example, New Zealand country run many awareness campaign about wildlife which bring enormous change in number of wild animal. It has been increase around 23%.
To recapitulate, there are myriad of solutions which curb disappearance of animal. If it follow properly so it would be beneficial to save the human on Earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46963562753 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18918372301 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 177.79662539 49.4020404114 360% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.1 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11649135852 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433471917311 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483730283955 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581372618104 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409228420925 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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