Research shows that business meetings discussions and training are happening online nowadays Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

A study found that online communication is being adopted by companies in recent time. Its benefits are significant, far outweighing the drawbacks.

On the one hand, there are some disadvantages of working through online platforms. Firstly, poor internet connection from one of the participants can interrupt on-going work meetings. This means that those exchanges will not be effective. As a result, that company will not operate smoothly due to the lackluster communicating. Furthermore, it can be difficult to express emotions and body language in an online conference. This problem can be illustrated by the fact that the camera view is typically limited to the upper body or face, making it difficult to perceive and interpret non-verbal cues accurately. Because of the aforementioned reason, a training session may be more time-consuming than the one conducted in person.

On the other hand, communication over the internet is associated with several advantages, such as convenience and cost-savings which are greater than the shortcomings. In terms of convenience, with such a method, both remote employees and on-site employees are enabled to join work meetings in the comfort of their own homes. Therefore, the restraints of geographic distance will become irrelevant, leading to equal working opportunities for workers from all around the globe. In regard to cost savings, corporations that employ this practice will spend less money on holding meeting events since the fees of renting a physical location along with necessities for those events are out of the equation. Their remaining budget, accordingly, can be allocated to other sectors, namely marketing and material facilities.
While working online is disadvantageous in a few aspects, its benefits are more significant. It is recommended that all companies adopt this method of communicating.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, such as, as a result, in regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55438596491 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23204560701 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8306456821 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0821999156934 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287532992916 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351589430962 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583737380623 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020111564337 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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