According to a recently documented research, many criminals who were sent to jail tend to resort to committing crimes on being set free. Two of the most common reasons could be old habits die hard and the stigma of being termed a criminal. While not much can be done to change a person's personality, they can be taught a skill and integrated in society.This essay shall discuss these reasons and provide solution to the problem.
To begin with, many commit petty crimes namely shoplifting and pick pocketing as they are habitual to it and have mastered the art. In addition, they enjoy the trill and find it impossible to change even after being sent to prison. Secondly, once someone is sent to prison, irrespective of the nature of the crime and on being set free they will always be identified as a prisoner. They find it extremely tedious to find employment and consequently resume their criminal activities to sustain themselves. Therefore, in order to avoid rejection and the difficulty change one's character forces them to embrace their dark side.
Although, some habits are deeply ingrained and impossible to break, efforts should be made to teach them a skill. During their duration in prison, the officials must ensure they impart some knowledge and inculcate the inmates with skills that are essential to survive in the real world. For example, prisons these days have mandatory computer classes to update to date with technology along with compulsory exercise or sports to maintain a healthy life. Moreover, the government has introduced reformation programs where prisoners on being set free have to devote some time volunteering and on successful completion and satisfactory results they are placed in corporate jobs.
To conclude, old habits and bad publicity forces people to commit crimes even when they are set free. Encouraging them to transform and acceptance by society can get them on the right path.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... While not much can be done to change a persons personality, they can be taught a skill...
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Line 1, column 354, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...aught a skill and integrated in society.This essay shall discuss these reasons and p...
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Line 3, column 571, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...oid rejection and the difficulty change ones character forces them to embrace their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09463722397 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7011960886 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599369085174 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3054135153 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.357142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289663945797 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096234034822 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856505566426 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176891321756 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882023139302 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.