The responsibility of bringing up children should be shared equally between mother and father. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The debate whether both the parents are responsible for the upbringing of their children is getting controversial these days. In my opinion, I believe that it is not necessary to make both mother and father liable for this.
Admittedly, the presence of both the parents can be beneficial for children during developing phase. It can teach youngsters necessary traits of life which can be vital in achieving success at later stages. In fact, a child can learn qualities of hard work, endurance and persistence from the personality of a father, while a mother can instill emotional understanding and mental toughness from an early age. All these skills are vital for anyone to be a better person and a successful professional in adult life. For example, according to a statistical survey, 25% children who are brought up by both the parents understand and practice good moral and social attributes.
However, I consider that there are many families where youngsters are brought up by a single parent and yet they achieve whatever the opposites can. As a matter of fact, there are numerous societies where a father is employed somewhere outside their hometown and is away for an extended period of time. In this situation a mother is solely responsible for managing the house and children and thus plays a pivotal role of developing good characters in the new generation. They, in fact, become more mature and responsible towards their families and communities as they understand the value of togetherness. For instance, about 35% individuals raised by a single parent end up having a professional degree in Indonesia alone.
In conclusion, although both parents play a crucial part in character building of children, I think that a single parent can also help them absorb good moral and social norms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 288, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a matter of fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11784511785 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87174794397 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56228956229 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4418783786 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126076026684 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501826268794 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022847856916 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788165029291 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309032177078 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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