Rich countries are helping poor countries through money, but they should also help them in another way. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Money is needed by all the countries in oder ti monitor the exchange of stock for demand and supply. Although, the developed nations are providing aid to underdeveloped countries through monetory but alternative help should also be provided by the rich countries to poor countries. This essay will discuss both the aspects for agreement as well as disagreement of monetary helping.
To begin with, most of the developed nations provide funds either to developing countries or underdeveloped countries. No doubt, the transfer funds eventually support the economy of the nation but somehow this kind of supportive help does not exist for long time. For an instance, Africa is reinforced by other countries in terms of money but the development in that area is still lacking, because the funds can only be helpful till they are spend for good will, but if it does not become the part of the system it cannot aid in development of the country.
On the other hand, instead of contributing only in financial help it is feasible to guide the nation in infrastructural development such as defence, businesses, technology and so on. India and Russia are collaborated with each other for technological as well as defence development. Indeed, this collaborated contribution is helping both the nation's equally. Additionally, this is also showing the stabilization in economical growth to both the countries.
To sum up, the funding is important for the poor countries but the fund helping should be in such a way that it is beneficial for both the nations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 338, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... discuss both the aspects for agreement as well as disagreement of monetary helping. To...
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Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...funds can only be helpful till they are spend for good will, but if it does not becom...
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Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...is is also showing the stabilization in economical growth to both the countries. To sum...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, kind of, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0862745098 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03982536579 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8790608082 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.909090909 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23012059956 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903064473134 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873647604013 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159472093851 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699159033794 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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