In the world of globalization, Many economically sound nations offer financial packages to resolve the issue of poverty in poor countries. Some people believe that wealthy countries should support them in diverse ways including financial help. These views will be delved with the supporting arguments in the further essay.
First of all, a few parts of the world are trying to decline the rate of poverty. So, developed kingdoms provide economic support to provide basic necessities to the people who are below the poverty line in developing countries. The good illustration of this is the government of Pakistan, who got help in the form of money to reduce poverty in their nation from the federal government of the USA. Thus, in order to tackle poverty in modest countries, many well developed countries are sanctioning the currency help.
On the other hand, some propose that economic aid is not only enough to resolve this problem. Helping countries should invest in their industries to create employment opportunities in those nations, which will raise the standard of life.To prove this, there is a famous saying that "if you feed fish to one, you just feed for a day, but if you teach one to fish then you feed one for lifetime". In addition, they should also monitor and manage the flow of cash support in those countries to avoid use of that money in worst purposes such as corruption and to support terrorist activities.
To put it in nutshell, I pen down with saying that I agree that financial aid is necessary but it is not effective way to overcome the concern of people's financial struggle in impoverished countries, but there are many other factors which can ameliorate this issue such as employment and well monitored budget of those nations. The government should work efficiently to deteriorate this issue for the betterment of their people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...oms provide economic support to provide basic necessities to the people who are below the poverty...
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Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
..., which will raise the standard of life.To prove this, there is a famous saying th...
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Line 5, column 526, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the worst'.
Suggestion: in the worst
...se countries to avoid use of that money in worst purposes such as corruption and to supp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, thus, well, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02564102564 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75608227029 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.5370860053 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218615276891 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747772785245 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580946809039 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127246729981 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344761884896 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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