Scientists predict that in the future cars will be driven by computers. What are the reasons behind this? It is a positive or negative development.
In some countries using car as a way of transport is crucial especially when there is a lack in the public transportation. Since the number of car accidents is increasing dramatically those days, researches are studying new method where the cars will be operated by computers instead of humans.
In fact there are many reasons for this, starting with the increasing numbers of people who die or have a permanent disability secondary to car accidents. Therefore using a computer to replace human while driving a car will have a lot of advantages since the numbers of accidents and the human errors will be reduced. In addition, we all agree that driving can induce a lot of stress especially when there is traffic so by using computers we will be solving this issue too. For instance, new studies have shown that the cases of anxiety to be more in people who have cars.
Although as mentioned earlier, using computers instead of humans will have a lot of positive impact. There will still be some disadvantages. Firstly the good feeling that the person can have while he is driving. We all know that driving might increase the endorphins which a hormone responsible of happiness. Secondly, if you need to learn about your road the only way is to drive yourself since visual memories are the best to keep information. Last and not least, driving will help you to become automated and do multi tasks at the same time.
In my opinion I think that replacing the human by the computers while driving a car will have more pros and cons since this will affect directly the number of people dying from car accidents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... disability secondary to car accidents. Therefore using a computer to replace human while...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76868327402 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62458350911 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537366548043 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0377401585 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218059213868 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832205006036 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063811143392 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149767960141 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338981302116 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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