Shopping is becoming increasingly common as a leisure activity but some people believe that this has advantages and disadvantages. This essay will argue that shopping has become popular because men and women consider it as a mind relaxing activity and this will cause a person to spend more money and to increase the quality of life by paying more taxes.
Nowadays, people have a busy lifestyle due to various reasons such as work and personal commitments. Because of that humans always tend to find some regular activities that they can release their streets. That is why, in the current contest, shopping has become very popular. For example, Keells is a famous supermarket chain in Sri Lanka and they facilitate their customers to buy daily essentials through their website but still, a lot of walk-in customers are seen at the stores.
Even though shopping is popular as a leisure activity, it can create some negative impact on a person’s economy. Someone continues to do shopping more regularly is that he or she spending more money running out of salary for even some unwanted things. On the other hand, shopping creates a positive impact on society. The increased shopping makes taxpayers pay more taxes where governments can increase the services to the public. This would create a better lifestyle. For example, most western countries have a better quality of life due to more taxpayers.
In conclusion, often people consider shopping as a leisure activity and that is the reason that shopping is popular. It also causes some negative impact on individuals to spend more money and increasing the quality of life by paying more taxes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... such as work and personal commitments. Because of that humans always tend to find some...
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Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...opping more regularly is that he or she spending more money running out of salary for ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, even so, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06227106227 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.630414127 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531135531136 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2073010814 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398979358389 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145609648464 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944290718447 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273455156186 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988091598792 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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