Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of young people.
Why do you think that?
Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities?
Youngsters are significant target market for business, which remarks shopping as their favorite pastime in order keep themselves occupied and up to date with the latest trends. Several factors can be identified beneath that. Rather, there are numerous useful activities that generates far more productive results for betterment of themselves and for the society in general.
Firstly, with the availability of enormous options in the market place complemented by ease of transportation, young generations views it as a much lucrative alternative to get away from boredom and homesickness. Not only, they manage to keep themselves updated with the latest trends, but also taking friends along will facilitates them demonstration of their affluent status. Considering their spending habits does not remain limited to fashion, but extend it to gadgets, eat outs and much more, which provides an additional edge in terms of being presentable to the outside world and driving themselves with the latest trends. In this materialistic world, people would like to reap the benefits of material things by spending their hard-earned money for the fulfillment of their inner urge, which has been substantiated by enormous anecdotal evidences available over the web.
In contrast, significance of investing such scare time over alternative activities and benefits obtained out of such far more outweighs than passing time on shopping. In my views, youth carries far more responsibilities on their shoulder. Time is a scare resource a making its perfect use is everyone duty. Youth should be encouraged to saw their time in seeding in sports, outdoor activities, skill development, in order to ripe the outcomes as health building and career building. Indeed, their efforts will not go into vain and assist them in their productivity enhancement, which leads towards wealth creation for themselves and attainment of long-term mission of their country. However, they need to forgo their present entertainment for the success of their future. Any left over time can be contributed for social activities, helping others and abundance of voluntary activities in order to repay to society against consumption of society resources.
At the end, we infer, although decision regarding utilization of spare time to be retained by the individual, yet it’s appropriate and most fruitful use need to be understood. The best conclusion, which can be drawn from above juxtaposition demonstrates that merits of encouragement of adults towards utilizing its time in other listed activities outweigh their pastime on shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'facilitate'
Suggestion: facilitate
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...utweighs than passing time on shopping. In my views, youth carries far more respon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, so, in contrast, in general, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04219904017 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4730053412 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.25 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125744278385 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450628672796 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319467432438 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898532219313 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380371880432 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.