Should long-term job-seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge experience.
To commence, long term work candidates of an administration have Gigantic profits so that they are entitled to request to participate in the task so that in future they can give something back to the society.It is important to Every individual who is not having power Jobs.The following essay will interpret the situations from both the aspects.
The candidates who are currently doing long-term jobs has a delightful future because they receive much benefit from the authority. For example, free railway transportation will be provided for the railway employees and there is no job-risk as private jobs.It is fixed for a lengthy period of time. Furthermore, they have the opportunity of transferring their job and position to their children in case of death. Also, they have a good chance of referring to students in the form of loan guarantee who migrate for further Studies abroad.
Now a days, to divulge, the ministry Employees are made to volunteer work in order to motivate the other people so that they can build their career in a good position in their respected countries.They have the chance of helping the poor people who are in need because they have astonishing salaries and have the pride of fulfilling the concerns raised by a particular community.
In my opinion, many people of higher authorities, notwithstanding their work, they are trying in every aspect to help and participate intriguingly.They play a crucial role in every sector and department.
To conclude, the government job-seekers Nonetheless Of their working and earning, they are jubilant to give their time in giving the best back something in Public.In future, the government delightfully aims for the development of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, nonetheless, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20143884892 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05445462891 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557553956835 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.0531923451 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.75 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.75 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241231388308 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110194718123 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692547771394 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138655369359 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690924011068 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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