Time is changing and so is the paramount significance of considering old people from all walks of life as decent role models to pursue. Whether following well-experienced elderly people by immature adolescents is a must or not has sparked a heated debate. Although it is argued by some that teenagers ought to be inspired by the old sayings just owing to averting mistakes to be made, this is stringently refuted by this essay. Should old people’s manners are not challenged by young people, undoubtedly, the latter group cannot be survived, from a successful perspective, in today’s competitive world. Throughout the following paragraphs, these standpoints will be meticulously scrutinized to advocate the second verdict as an acceptably rational viewpoint.
On the one side, the more the elderly’s experience is considered by the young, the fewer mistakes, either minor or major, will be made by inexperienced young adults. Take an extremely young tradesman, enjoying an extensive diversity of very priceless advice from his adequately sophisticated grandfather in his adventurous business, as an illustration. Doing so, in every economically essential situation, the best critical decisions will be made to hamper financial damages by this young businessman, thanks to respecting his matured grandfather as a well-informed consoler. This glaringly apparent instance can clearly exemplify that by following old people’s recommendations, a wide variety of mistakes can be hampered by the young. However, although it deems a must to constitute the old sayings as invaluable informative resources that can catalyze to make youths personally triumphant, this approach is sternly denied by this essay to a great extent.
In the nowadays competitive world, on the other hand, not purely following the aged crowd can play an indispensable role in every young individual’s success, in terms of challenging outdated traditions. In the past, a myriad of youths got married in their 20s just as a custom, for instance. In the 21st century, this can act as a precursor to preclude achieving some long term goals that might have been set by adolescents, due to tremendous competitions that are currently existed to achieve personal targets. By this, the young can either follow the tradition of early marriage at the cost of neglecting their purposes or not, breaking the mold. By shedding a light on this simple example, it is obviously proved that it is preponderant to change some obsolete stereotypes in favor of getting personal aims at an early age. It, thus, deems that not only is it better to ignore what the old say, but it is vital enough to be successful, specifically in the current competitive century.
To recapitulate, after careful situational analysis of some boons and demerits of following old people, that are closely associated with avoiding mistakes and not keeping the momentum going, respectively, it seems that, nowadays, challenging old customs is a key part for the young. It is, therefore, hoped these predominant points will be taken into account the world over in the foreseeable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2645.0 1615.20841683 164% => OK
No of words: 493.0 315.596192385 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36511156187 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24646535403 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 176.041082164 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578093306288 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 828.9 506.74238477 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.182209981 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.944444444 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3888888889 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157295991401 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538159577478 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674886036639 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989263031055 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504404247632 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 78.4519038076 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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