Improving technology has been changing the world, accordingly, this improvement affects our lives in many ways. However, from my point of view, such development technology definitely has a negative impact as well as benefits.
Above all, modern technology helps people to communicate with each other without any limitation and no extra cost. For example, people who live in different countries or cities could talk and see their families or friends by using a cellphone or computer through free applications like WhatsApp by using the global network system at any time.
Apart from making communication, recent technology can save people's lives in case of an emergency. For instance, many diseases can be cured by modern tools and medicines which doctors use to treat patients like heart attack, stroke or accident, also people could learn many things from websites or educational applications throughout the Internet even they can attend in online university courses and complete their education.
On the other hand, misuse of technology could lead individuals to forget about their roots in the future. As an illustration, young people and children regularly use the internet and social media as a habit and they see other people lives and lifestyle like what they eat, drink or wear so that they start to imitate other people behaviors or cultures and after while they can not remember their traditional manner.
In conclusion, although the new achievement in technology has side effects on society and people's lifestyle, in my opinion, technology could help individuals to improve their relationship with other cultures around the world and learn more about the civilization.
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:say why he/she would not enjoy going to collegeexplain wh 73
- Nowadays more and more business meetings and business training are taking place online. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- Should young people follow older people’s example or it’s good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
- Some say that people living in high rise apartments are lonely and unhappy while others say that it s advantageous to stay in high rise apartments Discuss both views and give your opinion 92
- Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. they have just sent you some photos of your holiday.write a letter to your friends . say thank them for the photos and for the holidayexplain why you did not write earlier and invit 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...odern tools and medicines which doctors use to treat patients like heart attack, st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, so, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38490566038 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80571557216 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0972040234 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.555555556 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4444444444 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.3333333333 7.06120827912 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172365176061 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749210976422 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323298791376 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096353782332 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393497663199 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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