Should young people follow older people’s example or it’s good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Change is inevitable. Examples will be made and challenged all the time. There always going to be a new thing to replace the old one. Then a question will arise whether the old belief or reasons still valid and stood the test of time or if the opinions will not be definite and can be altered by fresh thoughts and ideas. Both the views will be discussed ahead.
Civilisation to civilisation changes have occurred. Some are welcomed and others not so much but many plausible explanations are still being practiced till date and yesteryear generation still considers the young generation to follow this blindly. One of the theory can be stated as it will shatter the respect of the older people and their beliefs and norms. The other opinion can be that still the previous example stood untimely so no other theory is able to prove it wrong till this date. Even today's youth also believes and considers learning from the previous mistakes is beneficial rather than committing one. It is impossible to change the original with the current completely.
But in some cases it has been proven that there is a need to change and this has brought fruitful results. In the earlier times, especially in India it was believed that the practice of Sati system for women is important even if it means taking her freedom because of her husband's sudden demise. This was challenged by the Great leader Raja Rammohan Roy and Swami Vivekananda and this brought a greater change in the women's position in the society. Another daring example was education and unnecessary early marriage of girls without their consent. The practice was considered unshakable and if ever changed or altered was considered to be the demise of the whole community. In fact, no one was able to do anything about it. But, as they say time heels so this practice was challenged by the educated, young and talented and open-minded people. Although, it took more time and sacrifice but even this is immovable task was finally achieved. Moreover, this made people belief that some things are needed to be challenged and not taken as it is for the greater good of the future generations.
To sum up, I belief that old examples are worthy of their respect and deserve admiration. Some theories still are accurate and unshakable because of the logic behind them but it does not necessarily mean that the young generation should blindly follow everything without any reason of thought and opinion. In case of women the challenge to these ancient and old examples proved their worth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'wrongs'?
Suggestion: wrongs
... so no other theory is able to prove it wrong till this date. Even todays youth also ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
... to prove it wrong till this date. Even todays youth also believes and considers learn...
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Message: Did you mean 'believe' (verb) instead of belief (noun)?
Suggestion: believe
... the future generations. To sum up, I belief that old examples are worthy of their r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, still, then, in fact, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 13.1623246493 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 10.4138276553 278% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84331797235 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53609086704 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518433179724 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7471408663 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3913043478 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8695652174 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65217391304 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169532570048 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440882875712 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522466632091 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101592787971 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289669851729 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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