It is postulated by some that teenagers ought to obey the older generation’s rules while I support the idea of those individuals that concur rules should be challenged by teenagers.
On the one hand, some people hold the view that teenagers could be more successful in their future life by following the resolutions which are introduced by the elderly. That is to say, experiencing a myriad of distinctive awkward situations during their precious lives, older people potentially are able to distinguish the goods from evils which teenagers may face in their life especially when they are dealing with selecting among options. Take an old grandfather that changed his occupation several times when he was a full-fledged employee in some internationally renowned companies as one of the most patent examples; He can play a role of an accomplished counselor for his grand-children by passing a piece of useful advice.
Other people, on the other hand, argue that the experience of elder people is not beneficial for teenagers since they live in a fully different world compared to the previous generation world. Put it another way, having faced a wide range of cutting-edge technologies, teenagers have new various opportunities that do not exist in the past. Internet, as a clear example, offers a multitude number of careers that are mainly obscure to older individuals such as website management, online shop assistants, and so on. The more new internet-based equipment introduces as a result of a great pace in technology, the more impractical the old experiences are for teenagers.
In conclusion, although views differ about whether old rules which are made by old generations are merits for teenagers, I reckon that if teenagers want to be a successful person in the future, they should break the mold and cope with the new world order.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16279069767 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10954581468 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598006644518 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4772287005 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.666666667 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4444444444 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148165855429 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566504795193 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043337116562 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862917227902 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357403570013 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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