Sports have become an inevitable part of people's lives in the world. Many individuals believe that competition in sports can help people to get closer to society whereas others worry that this is causing problems between nations or governments.
It is argued that sports activities could be a great way to bring people together from different parts of the country or the world and help them to know their culture or build a better political partnership. For example, football is a very popular sport in the world people come to gather from different nationality may have the same favorite team in football's tournaments and they cheer up their team at the stadium side by side, also in other kinds of sports competition like Olympic Games many countries attend in other sports games like gymnastics, running, swimming, etc and have team so they can communicate with each other and know their culture.
On the other hand, some insist on competitive sports could be a leading factor for serious problems between groups of individuals. Obviously, every sporting event has own trouble like gambling between top officials in order to guaranty the results of the game or players do doping because of their own profits in the game, in addition, sport’s fans could be starting a fight to each other and in some cases killing innocent people during their fights and damage their favorite team reputation.
From my point of view, sports games are the best way to show our culture to other people in different regions. For instance, countries throwing big competition every year and invite other teams to come and attend their friendly matches, so that they can visit other people's cultures like their foods, dresses or historical building and national museums.
In conclusion, although sports tournament could spark of conflict problem between nationalities in the same country or the other, it is offering peace in the world by inviting people to watch and contribute to sport activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10397553517 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61202182713 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547400611621 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.771700388 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.444444444 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3333333333 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347784677282 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172610950278 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040312260496 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214991783702 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193460008782 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.